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Julia Bedell's avatar

I am enthralled. 10/10, total stunner

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Jill's avatar

Wait for part 2… 😇 x

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Mr. Troy Ford's avatar

I can't wait.

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david roberts's avatar

Perfect example about how to write about sex. Loved this. Plus the lyric sounds like "matters" And I have a Stevie jukebox in my head so i was playing the song!

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Jill's avatar

You’re very kind David, thank you. I also have Stevie on mental loop, nothing better 🤝

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Holly Starley's avatar

Fantastic, Jill!

Also, can’t get Edge of Seventeen out of my head now. 🤣

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Jill's avatar

Sorry (not sorry 😅🕊️) thanks for reading Holly 🙏

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Holly Starley's avatar

As well you shouldn’t be. It’s a terrific song.

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Lindsey's avatar

Whoa. absolutely incredible writing. CANNOT wait for the next installment. Sigh. Rob. What a thrill!

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Jill's avatar

Coming soon 😘🙏

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John Lovie's avatar

Thank you, Jill, for so brilliantly writing down what so many of us keep hidden inside. Yeah, Stevie Fucking Nicks. It was his break up with her that inspired Lindsey Buckingham to write "Go your own way," which of course I did. Sort of.

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Jill's avatar

Stevie Fucking Nicks 👑🙌

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Geoff's avatar

Love the slow burn of this story. There is an explosion coming for which I cant wait. The almost indifferent tone of the reader is gripping. Love it!!

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Jill's avatar

Thanks Geoff 🙏

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Carlo Navato's avatar

Incredibly powerful writing Jill. Hooked

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Jill's avatar

🙏thanks Carlo

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Adam Nathan's avatar

This is so great, Jill. Period. Full stop. If you don’t get a 1000 likes on this, the universe is shit. What I mean to say is get ready for a good cry.

It is 2:45 in the morning here and I have several little thoughts that I think are fine little bookend additions to this, but, as I wrote, it is 2:46 in the morning and the opportunity for catastrophically disastrous comments about Stevie Nicks and fidelity are I’ll-advised.

They are not quite as funny as this, but you’ve done your work here and launched a 1000 comedians.

Great piece of writing. I would use the “bow” icon but my eyes are bad and I’m never sure if it’s a man or a woman and that is its own disaster.

🙇

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Sissitrix's avatar

Definitely the most suggestive chart of the year.

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Tommy Dixon's avatar

Beautiful piece of writing Jill. Enthralling.

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Dillo's avatar

Well done Jill-That was delicious & fun-:)

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James Bailey's avatar

Genius. Best piece I’ve read all year. The story: riveting. The writing: exquisite.

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Jill's avatar

Thank you James! 🙏

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David Kirkby's avatar

Well, I guessed the song...

And yes - it can't happen unless there is something wrong in the first relationship to begin with.

Great writing!

Best Wishes - Dave :)

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Jill's avatar

Thanks Dave 🙏 you got it 🎯

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Vanessa's avatar

Love your writing, waiting for pt.2💥💥💥💥💥

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Jill's avatar

Thank you Vanessa! 🙏 coming soon

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Barbara Ward Thall's avatar

Delicious writing!

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Jill's avatar

Thank you Barbara 🙏

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Mr. Troy Ford's avatar

Just wow. Jill spills the tea.

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